Revision and adverbs
Amongst other things, I revised the final chapter of my mediaeval novel set in Edward II's reign. I am now asking myself whether 'He laughed drunkenly,' or 'His drunken laughter rang out,' reads best. I chose the latter because I prefer to get rid of adverbs.
Labels: Adverbs, Edward II of England, Mediaeval Novel, revision, Rosemary Morris Historical Novelist
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